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Posted at June 24, 2020
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Dynamic Writing

The essay for “Once More to the Lake” feels very dynamic because it first shows how the speaker feels abysmal because of his fear of how the forthcoming war may destroy the lake, but it takes a dynamic shift into how he feels happy with his by his side on the lake. The strongest dynamic paragraph that I have in the essay is the first paragraph because it discusses his happy memories with his father at the lake and then crosses-over to how the war may negatively affect his special place. The least dynamic paragraph was the fifth paragraph because it only talks about how nostalgic the speaker feels and does not really deviate from that aspect. Nevertheless, the essay gives off plenty of dynamics and descriptive words. 

 

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